there's a gap between our worlds,
a rupture in our souls,
a solemn promise--broken
by the great and mighty foe.
there's a crack running down the wall,
it doesn't hurt--we never cry.
[
or do we?]
there's a scar beneath the skin,
we never see it hidden underneath.
a wound [
it's painful]
but there's a song that won't be broken,
does it close the gap, we ask?
the harmony of the universe...
[
let me tell you darling. hold on.]
the light will be flooding in soon
right after dusk.
Such a sensitive yet powerful piece of writing. The last stanza tied the poem together so well.
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Delete*sharp intake of breath* wow... this hit really near to home.
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DeleteNO WAY, YOU WROTE THIS???? THIS IS SO INCREDIBLE. And the image just fits perfectly. So good omggggg.
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Little Moon Elephant
The second stanza is my favourite, it's insanely powerful omg.
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